The Most Admirable Person in My Life
In the world, people are admired because of their personality, wealth, popularity and their talents. Reasons are different from person to person. But, I think one should admire people who are special and important to them. For me, my mother is so special to me. She is the most admirable person in my life due to many reasons. Some of them which I most appreciate are her love and caring, hard working and social working.
My mother always has a great caring about us and all other family members. She does everything she can do on behalf of her children and the husband. She takes care of all of us before taking care of herself. To our father she treats like a mother. To us, she is a teacher, a friend, a mentor and a guardian. From our childhood, we all were raised with a lot of love and caring. Although, we are grown now it has not been decreased even a little. I still can remember, when my mom prepared foods she every time looked for foods we preferred and were healthy for us. She always tries to make us happy by providing what we like. And also, the days she spent sleepless when we were sick were uncountable. She also maintains relationships with all our relatives by visiting them when she gets a chance and treats them with her best. Another good thing is, she takes care of her paralyzed parents. Every day she goes to see them and does whatever they want her to do. Mom never worries about the things she has to do for all of us. She thinks it is her responsibility and duty. Without her love and caring, I will not be like I am. This is the main reason I appreciate her in my entire life.
Another reason why I admire her is, she is a hard working woman. My mom is just like the sun in our family. She starts the day early in the morning before we all get up and goes to the bed after everyone in the family goes to sleep. When we were schooling, she arranged our breakfasts and lunch quickly and brought us to...
THE PERSON I ADMIRE
Ever person admires someone. They are the reason we keep going on despite all the challenges and temptations. They help us go on the right way. They stand as our bones that help us stand straight. They will do everything for you.
There are many people who influence my life, but there is that one special person who showed me more than I could see in the world. That special someone is my MOM. She taught me to keep moving even though I'm close to giving up, she believes that there is always something special waiting for me; you just need to have your faith and believe in yourself. There is one time that I wanted something really bad but she said no and told me that "want" is different from "need". She told me that material things are not important we should be contented in what we have and be thankful for it. During my childhood life there are times that I hated her because she often scold me, but then I realized why she does that because it's their way of showing their love and that, it is not us that they get mad at it's what we did wrong.
(am still working on it)
This is nicely written.
There is one time that I wanted something really bad but she said no and told me that "want" is different from "need".
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Maybe you should revise the way you begin this essay, FIRST: introduce the idea of your mom being the one you admire, THEN explain all of the qualities that you describe. Be sure to focus on the qualities of your mother that you admire most, include aspects of her personality, her job, her passions and interests, then link your own self to her qualities. You are already doing these things, just trying to emphasize the best way for you to stay on track. Tell it like its a story, make your words flow. I wish you luck :)
Every person admires someone.
She taught me to keep moving even though I'm close to giving up, she believes that there is always something special waiting for me; " You just need to have your faith and believe in yourself."
During my childhood life there are times that I hated her because she would often scold me, but then I realized why she does that. I t's her way of showing her love and that, it is not me that she go t mad at, it's what I did wrong. You could also give an example of how she helped you learn from a mistake and how that ties into why you admire her so much. (am still working on it) Good so far :)